I Need You

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Friday, 19-Aug-2005 19:40:04

When things are crazy and going awry,


I do it myself, or I at least try,


but when I do, I just crash when I fly;


I often forget that I need you.


I tried so hard to get back up again,


to mend my old wounds and to take a stand,


but now, I have fallen; I've fallen again,


and now realize that I need You.


And just when I thought my dark days were done,


that they left me alone, and they were all gone,


they came back to haunt me, and we're back at square one,


and I realize again that I need You.


And no matter what, You take me back.


You heal all my wounds, give me strength which I lack,


You take my hand and get me back on track,


and every day of my life, I need You.


My Jesus, sweet Jesus, I need You.

Post 2 by kev (Zone BBS Addict) on Saturday, 20-Aug-2005 8:37:52

nice

Post 3 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Saturday, 20-Aug-2005 10:48:33

good poem.

Post 4 by louiano (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Saturday, 20-Aug-2005 15:52:08

I love your talent of writing...

Post 5 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Saturday, 20-Aug-2005 22:01:40

Wow Mel I can only say I totally agree and this touches me. Keep on writing *hugs*.

Post 6 by silly_singer (The girl who's always lost in a melody) on Sunday, 21-Aug-2005 12:33:01

Wow! Mel I love the way you write! God gave you a gift that's for sure!

Post 7 by kev (Zone BBS Addict) on Sunday, 21-Aug-2005 12:33:48

yeh mel think writing would be a good career for u

Post 8 by sexycop (Account disabled) on Sunday, 21-Aug-2005 20:44:50

that was pretty cool.

Post 9 by saiyan4414 (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Monday, 22-Aug-2005 7:57:36

Keep at it little sis.